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You Have No Grace by ~thefurrez:iconthefurrez:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark


Write millions and millions of letters.
Lines and lines of words.
And yet.. Its meaningless.
Because you have no grace.

You write like its a chore.
To fill greedy hands.
And yet.. Their greed is meaningless.
Because your filling has no grace.

They feed off your bullshit images.
The stories of unexperienced things..
Things you could never feel or know.
Hate, depression, fear, uncareing..
You dont understand.
You never will..  I can call you what I want.
Because the words I choose are true.
And the truth in what I say,
is found in the smallest phrase.
You Have No - g r a c e -
©2003-2009 ~thefurrez
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Author's Comments

.. I hate him.

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~brokenlolita Dec 16, 2003, 10:19:36 PM
hmm....
hate who?
its an awsome poem to say the least

"Things you could never feel or know.
Hate, depression, fear, uncareing..
You dont understand. "
^ I like.... ^

:rose:

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"If your wings have been broken and you can no longer move...come to me to find your peace, nestled here against my chest...I will welcome your to this place where flowers forever bloom...and will grant to you a dream from which you will not awake"
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~thefurrez Dec 17, 2003, 3:24:59 PM
My cousin Trav. The poem explains why I hate him. ^^ Im glad you liked it. Its one of my favorite pieces.

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Why cry for yesterday? Tomorrows a whole new disaster..
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~madtipsy Dec 18, 2003, 6:09:09 PM
niiiiiiice

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"I once thought I had mono for an entire year. It turned out I was just really bored."-Wayne's World
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~falcon13 Dec 18, 2003, 7:07:12 PM
I like the poem. And I know I'm not naive. The people who I'v depicted in my poem are a bit shallow and really do think its a joke. I know what really goes on in war becuase I am indirectly connected to it.

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"Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting..HOLY @#$%!! What a RIDE!!"
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~thefurrez Dec 19, 2003, 5:51:00 PM
Nu, i wasnt directing nieve-ness towards you.. I was directing it twords the ignorant and close minded people. o.0 Glad you liked my piece.

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Why cry for yesterday? Tomorrows a whole new disaster..
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~dog4lifedmx Dec 26, 2003, 9:09:10 PM
I think you pointed out that you hated him (whoever him is) very well! I like it!

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I never took the smile away from anybody's face
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~tragicrabbit Jan 22, 2004, 10:36:58 AM
i like the first stanza the best i think. just out of curiosity, who is this about? reminds me of some of the writers i know who don't appreciate their talent ^__^
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~thefurrez Jan 22, 2004, 1:13:11 PM
I first wrote it about my cousin trav.. But as I read it over and over, I realize its more about me, and how I feel twords myself. Truly and honest poem in concerns twords the inners of my shell. Glad you liked it.

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Why cry for yesterday? Tomorrows a whole new disaster..
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~ralasterphecy Feb 16, 2004, 1:10:34 AM
Wow...I can see this runs very deep. Your emotion is powerfully expressed, and your words stabbing right into the heart of the matter. Hope you will find peace from this. It's good to have poetry as an avenue to alieviate these kind of feelings. I like the way you express yourself. Perhaps you need grace for yourself as well :D :hug:

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